How old are you man?
Nice job, keep it up. I have a few words of advice for you as what to think about while you're carrying on your quest to be the greatest guitar player in the world, don't think i'm an ass or anything, just a little help.
A few times during the Verse part, you sort of "dump" the end of the F to jump to the palmed E's, it's sort of the fear of not hitting the chords right on time, so you cut them short.
The solo part was the same.
Remember that yeah, you're always trying to hit the note right on time, but you don't want to sacrifice the end of a note or chord to make it. I used to do it too, and i'm sure everyone did at some point.
Now you can play that, go for something more challenging, practice that until you've got it 90% covered, then go back to floyd, it'll be better.
Try Breed.
