I love the lyrics! The only problem is they rhyme too good and i am trying to figure out how to sing fast without sounding like i'm rapping. It becomes a poem unless i can make a melody out of it. The chorus flows and works with the guitar parts. I'll keep working on it. I don't guess there's a trick to singing fast and still sounding musical? Any ideas of something i can listen to where the words are fast and it still sounds good? I pulled the one's i could think of. I don't want to do the pearl jam animal thing where it sounds like gibberish. Any ideas?? It's 111 bpm.